I want to ask for criticism and advice

Hello friend
Allow me to ask, I want to ask criticisms and suggestions from friends about the design of my brochure. If it is bad, please criticize the severity and ask for an explanation
thank you

hi this is super clean and pro globally but i think introducing a few touches of originality here and there , including a bit in terms of typo would not hurt but good work if u ask me

thank you very much for your advice and criticism, always healthy

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u are welcome, happy if i could help, if u feel like this is ok for u , just click the "solution"box :slight_smile: