I need your advice, I'll be accepted?

hi, try to work a little bit more typo and ty[o associations, especially for titles by the way so that , texts can spring out more. i would also recommend that u drop some smooth shadows behind vignettes and the small one week banner. i am advising u also to create a fake good quality logo so that u can display to people where the logo should be placed …i think that u also have a problem of spacing between the website and the phone number …