How about this one?
Hi @Elotha,
this version sounds better than the previous one, I don’t know if the structure of the song can be suitable for a commercial use, I listen to a structure of 3 bars in 5/4 and one last bar in 6/4, I’m not skilled in music of video games but maybe your track could be complex for a customer who listen to music in 4/4 or in 3/4… Anyway, very nice composition, i like it! 
Thank you for your feedback!
Yeah, music is 21/8 (or 21/4, not sure), the previous one was the same. I don’t know exactly why but I really enjoy doing this kinda stuff with different time divisions. I have tracks which are 11/8, 13/8, 15/4, 23/8, 25/8.