I need a feedback for my rejected logo

Halo please give some feedback for my rejected logo, thank you

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I would still work on the demo
It seems to me that at the junction of the head and body need to change something

Sincerely and have a nice day!

Thanks for sharing. it’s help me to fix my logo for next upload.

hi i think that the main problem that u have is a relative disconnection between the illustration and the typo parts , the two parts fail to imbricate enough at this stage and to connect as a whole so to speak … there is a matter of positioning and style indeed and let’s face it , the typo turns out to be rather flat for here, lacking originality, variations and combinations , pls keep in mind that this is probably the most important parts of all here …