I need a feedback for my logo

I’m new here. And all works I’ve done are rejected. Please, gimme a feedback for this logo. What is wrong with it and I can imrove it. Maybe I did big mistakes, but I don’t even understand what exactly is a problem

Hey buddy
Your logo is of very low quality to be accepted. Typography is bad represented. You need to upgrade your skills to be accepted at GR

Thanks for your feedback, but I need more details. What makes my logo very bad? The idea? Shapes or colors? The execution? What is about typography? Why is it bad represented? I am not very experienced designer, so I need more live knoledge from pros)

Uou need to learn more about graphics design. Here are some resources as a start.

Good luck.