I need a brutal honest critic on my Hard rejection

Hi there, i geht hard rejected!!

I hope a more experienced author can Help me further.

Thx in advance!!

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It doesn’t feel natural those sudden refills. The mix and instruments are OK but the arrangement is lacking of a better flow/transitions

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Thx for the honest answer!! ( my Englisch is Not the best, excuse me).

Best regards !

Alex Lindner!!

Thx for the honest answer!! ( my Englisch is Not the best, excuse me).

Best regards !

Alex Lindner!!

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As a side note, obviously you cannot use Tina Turner’s image to promote your music. This is a big no-no.

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Maybe she is Tina Turner… :joy:

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Hi!
In my opinion, space is the problem with this track . There is no depth, the music sounds flat and low frequencies sound too wide in the panorama (there is no phantom center because of this). Everything else -arrangement, musical balance, frequency balance, is well produced.
Sorry for my English.
Good Luck!

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Thx for your honest opinion!

Best regards

Alex Lindner