hi Shane, i think that color is ok indeed , this is like one of these summer night when the sun sets and that u have these orange - colors , not to m,mention that the creation looks nice with these colors …
the problem is more about the fact that u have no real “work on the background” and i goes that the picture is included otherwise guys who buy will be complaining that they bought an empty file so to speak … i have already had a guy complaining once that the creation was flatter when there was not the model inside and for anyone who knows me or my style a bit , i am the kind of guy who puts much effort in what i do , since almost all my works are based on elaborated compositions and that my style is not minimalistic to say the least … . Thus i do not even imagine what some guys who comment if they downloaded this flyer … who basically looks cool but which is almost based on the background image …
i think that his real focus should be much on making titles text more outstanding , however, if he could have a text and titles in particular popping up and that the whole flyer looks good, then everything will be ok 