I got rejected my track, what is wrong with it? Need someone's feedback!!!!

Hi, everyone! I got this track rejected, I need someone’s feedback and advise what is wrong, and if there any chance to fix it. Thanks a lot!!!

And here is another one, I’m trying to hit orchestral, is it gonna work or not?

Thank you!!!

You have amazing talent dude and also the idea was perfect .Just listen to the other author also listen to your music if what is the difference between the two… I think your music is too dry and a little bit boring when you hear the long introduction, better to have a short intro. Some of your instruments are too loud or overdrive you need to cut it down and have a little compression to balance all the instruments.

Thank you a lot!!!I’ll try to fix it. Too dry - you mean it needs more reverb or it’s about arrangement?