Take out the stock photography (presumably the fighters and the background?) and there’s not a huge amount there esp in such a competitive category.
The Pro MMA headline at the top could be improved
so my mistake here that i put more background pictures + the headline text need a bit more improvement
right ?
The headline is too similar to the date at the bottom which diluted it’s importance.
Given how competitive this category is then you need to decide what this is for - if it’s a flyer then you have limited dimension options but if this is for social media for example then you should be considering all sorts of other shapes and sizes eg post/story/video cover/portrait etc - this all adds premium value and makes it stand out against the competition and more useful to buyers
Similarly - consider how the design could be used of it was not for MMA I.e. if a buyer changes the background to a different sport or event then does it still work/offer opportunities
bad copy if so … this maybe the second reason lol
you have a valid point, but it’s not 100% copy so of course I’m missing something here or there… thanks for sharing
maybe lol