I designed this theme / Please Tell me your opinion



Hi, I designed this theme and I was told to put it in the forum. Please have a look at that and let me know if I can send it to themeforest for submission. If not I would appreciate it if you told me what are the things that need to be fixed. I also have made two other themes and I just put their images in here
The themes are a magazine and 3 different homepages and two news theme each with two home pages. They are all in ine theme.

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