How would you improve this track after a reject?

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#1

Hello everyone there in the forum!

(Little intro of myself)
I am Francky Iside, a self-taught musician from Madagascar (user soundparkp). I love playing the piano (12 years), I am in love for romantic, post-romantic, impressionist, flamenco and cinematic music. I have played as a pianist at professional level in 4-5 stars hotels as well as luxury restaurants in Italy and in Poland, for many years. I am passionate for digital music too and recently I begun introducing in music production world. Thank you for accepting me in this forum and community.

(The topic)
I have received a hard-rejected after submitting this tracks:

I am not sure why, and don’t know what to improve, so I would ask you all to give a feedback or tips, as you are more experienced.

Thank you in advance for any help!
Kind regards.
Francky


#2

Hey again, soundpark! The soundcloud link doesn’t appear to be working. Perhaps try reposting it?

Cheers!


#3

Hey @SeththeHuman, thank you for reporting the bug.
Here is the SoundCloud link:

Cheers


#4

For me:

  1. Sound is too midi. Very unnatural.
  2. Pan disbalanced to left side.
  3. Composition not best too.

#5

Hi @Sunday_Music,
Thank you for your letting my your opinion :heart:
Work in progress on this track…

Cheers!


#6

Mix some remix and rock type song in your voice which will improve your sound.