at first, I want to thank sir @n2n44 to gives me his feedback on my first copy. now I tried to develop little bit. and I hope you give me your feedback gays.
Hi guys I need your opinion on this logo. Will it be accepted? Do you have any notes that you can help me with it?
Sorry I say you that your logo is bad colors, shadow and typography, you need best your logo thank you.
@JeriTeam thank you for your opinion i preacher that. Do you think that I must remove the shadow and change the font?
Yes, I am not expert to logo but I invite you my friend @n2n44 he will help you because he know more that I and he is experience 17+ design graphic, good luck regards.
hi indeed, i think that u have a collection of problems
first of all sorry to say just this but quite frankly i cannot manage to identify what i the concept here and , in other words, what the illustration is supposed to be all about … in addition, this style, sort of detailed, in not really suiting the logo marketplace really well … the color combinations are not working and besides u are using a bit too many colors so that u manage to create a global coherence in the logo as a whole … for color choices, think about complementary colors, theme colors and shades of the same color , it will help u to bring some harmony to the table rathe easily , te typo is not original or worked out enough for here as here this is a central issue, probably the most important of all at the moment , what u have requires more originality, mare variations, more font combinations, and this would help u to have a tagline for this …
Realy i thank you soooo much because you comment on my topic . I will work on the advices that you dive it to me . And i will put again new demonstration.
Thank you so much .
Thank you jeri
u are welcome if u feel like this could help u enough , just click the “solution” box good work and good luck for the next submission
i am waiting for your opinion about my new edit for my logo.
hi @n2n44 i edit my logo again chek it please
With respect I would abandon this and start something new. If you really want to go on with it then:
the typography and font choices are far too plain and basic
even in the preview image the font you use in the description looks wrong and whilst not part of the logo, does become part of your submission
is the design entirely original and layered artwork and not just an adapted vector or other asset?
the think line areas on the roof etc will likely look odd when the image is made smaller or printed
yes its origenal i created fro the zero