Hey Dear Business card

Hello everyone, I get a lot rejected, and I don’t understand why.
I would like to get some feedback and advice on what am doing wrong and what can I improve.
Here are the latest works

hi indeed i have really no idea at all but on the other hand if teh thing looks cool in a general way this preview is not teh best to get to judge of all details from the card , posting a preview with only the design, not the mock up would be more convenient for us to tell u more …