Helpful community please assist me

Hello Helpful Community!

Please need your feedback about one of my Item (Soft Reject). I am getting same issues again and again. :thinking:
Issues: TYPOGRAPHIC HIERARCHY, VISUAL HIERARCHY, SPACING AND ALIGNMENT, COLOR PALETTE

Demo Here

Please give me some of your most valuable time to find out my mistake. Screnshots will be very helpful.

Thanks to all

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Hey mate. I’ll gladly give you my thoughts! Just remember, I’m not a reviewer so my opinion is based on my experience as an author! :slight_smile:

  1. Reduce this space - https://jmp.sh/JZcmsXn
  2. This font seems to large and grabs too much attention - https://jmp.sh/IUJHrdN
  3. This entire cutout might look better if the opacity would be adjusted to be semi view through, not just full opaque - https://jmp.sh/oPvQWAm
  4. This looks a bit weird - https://jmp.sh/aw1XPCv
  5. This looks too dark it creates contrasts issues - https://jumpshare.com/v/HpxQYrz1V8mbhvUpnptJ
  6. My opinion, either use shadows in both, or make the shadow on the right a bit less opaque. Also, the project title area needs some font readjustement. Line height is too small for the text, and the font really looks pulled out. Try a different font? https://jmp.sh/j5FQH9E
  7. This entire area is a pain for the eyes. The contrasts are tooooooo strooong :smiley: - https://jmp.sh/gNX5h1P - I would stick to a classic design here. Also, in the footer area the headings are huge, way, way to huge. I’d also change the social icons to not have a border around them.

These are in my opinion the main issues mate.
Cheers, and don’t give up! :slight_smile:

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very much appreciate, thank you @Enabled.

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Hope it helps you out mate. Cheers! :slight_smile:

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point 5 (This looks too dark it creates contrasts issues) screenshots is missing. please can you send again. Thanks

Sure thing. I’ve edited my previous reply. I was referring to the font above the heading. Cheers mate! :slight_smile:

thanks! Mate @Enabled . also thanks to @unlockdesign. To see screenshots I can realize my mistake. I will update here when will make necessary changes to get your final feedback. :slightly_smiling_face:

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Hey Mate! I have updated the template please check one more time for me (with clear cache) and give your feedback. Thanks :slightly_smiling_face:

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Will do in the morning mate, getting ready to leave the office now! :blush:

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Hi @Enabled again received same issues/comments: TYPOGRAPHIC HIERARCHY, VISUAL HIERARCHY, SPACING AND ALIGNMENT, COLOR PALETTE. Please check the template one more time and give feedback. Thanks

There still quite a few things.

These apply to other pages as well.

Cheers! :slight_smile:

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please provide some suggestion about footer. How can I improve the footer. Thanks a lot for your valuable time.

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I strongly recommend checking an inspiration website for things like these (but remember, inspire, add your own creativity, don’t copy) such as Dribbble or Behance. There are hundreds of ways to make it look great.

Overall your item has potential mate! I like it! Just needs some polish :slight_smile:

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Hi Mate, my Item got approved. It was really a long journey with a hard time spent but finally happy. Thank you for your very helpfull feedback. Also want to give thanks to reviewer because of reviewer strict position again and again same issues my Item has gotten much more improved and I am very happy with the last update (final design). Thank You So Much

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Very happy to hear and very glad to have helped! Good luck with sales mate! I just got a file approved as well just now! :smiley:

Cheers mate!

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