Hello everybody )))
I’m new here !!!
please tell your opinion about the track !!! is everything all right?


Hello! Too midi and pan disbalanced to right.
As for me.



I don’t really know what it is supposed to be. It has comedy / kids vibes but it tries to sound like a summer / pop track. For me the vibe is not clear. its confusing.

You need more separation and definition in the the low end. Sounds weak and muddy to me. I bet for rejection.

Keep doing more and more and better and more music, don’t worry about rejection and don’t put all your hopes in one track.

Compose, upload, forget, repeat.


Hi @PrestoAlex, this track is on the right direction, but it doesn’t make me think of a particular mood. If I were a buyer, I would struggle to place this in a piece of media easily. I would go towards the summer/pop vibe like @MarscottMusic suggests, with a simplified structure and only one or two strong melodic ideas. My advice is to push the guitar lines up. 0:26 seconds has an really interesting vibe to it. I would explore that as the central theme. The kick and snare are quite dominating too as far as the mix goes. Good luck!