Help with rejection?

music

#1

Hello All,

I’m wondering if anyone can help me figure out why this track was rejected?

https://soundcloud.com/iamgldn/positive-jazz-hop-demo

Here is the message I received in the email…

"Audio must be fully composed, arranged, mixed and/or mastered to a commercial standard, and have reasonable potential utility to our commercial buyers.

Please consider viewing our Top Sellers page to get a good sense of the commercial quality of popular files:

If you wish to resubmit more content, please review the engineering and composition and make improvements to a commercial standard before attempting to upload again."

I feel like there may be some conflicting melodies in the full section. Maybe the drums are too aggressive?

Any help appreciated.

Thanks!


#2

Very nice composition for me, but my opinion isn’t very important because I had a lot of rejections…

Good luck anyway! :wink:


#3

Hi friend,

  1. Your arrangement need more improves.
  2. Your mixing and master too. The instrument seem to pan so hard.
  3. Your kick is poor sound, it need more mellow feeling ( the low end).
    Hope it help. Good luck mate.

#4

Hey!)
I think, that 1st problem is mixing!
And 2nd problem is arranging!
Try to make melody!))))