help please why rejected

help to understand what is the reason? I guess it turned out to be very bright in high frequencies, but most likely something else. thanks in advance

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ELc3FgrTqyXzUlzlGSkAqVIHWaN058Oj/view?usp=sharing

In my opinion the sequence of loops is not very coherent, then comes the filter a little too deep. when at the end it is a little abrupt. That’s just my opinion.

thanks, I will analyze and correct