Help please to figure out the reason of rejection

Hello, everybody!
My track was rejected, could somebody help me to understand the reason.
I would appreciate your opinion!
Thank you.

find track by the link - https://soundcloud.com/pianio/sydney

Hi, Eleven77! First of all you have to know that:

  1. Iā€™m using google translate and
  2. I am far from being an expert in the musical style of your track.
    So, I can only speak from the sensations that your track produces.
    The first thing I feel is that the general sound of the track is very nice, soft and warm. Very suitable for this style!
    In particular, I find it hard to find the melody of the track. I understand that this style does not use a mix where the melody is something very prominent, but the feeling when listening to your track is to be listening to a long musical introduction (mainly during the first minute of music) and have the need for the track advance, develop and that does not happen.
    I think it can be a matter of mix and choice of instruments to highlight a little the melodic line of the track.
    I repeat, I am not an expert in this musical style so my opinion may be very wrong ā€¦
    I hope my words will help you.
    Regards!

It was really helpful.
Thank you very much for your comment. :slight_smile:

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