My track was rejected, could somebody help me to understand the reason.
I would appreciate your opinion!
find track by the link - https://soundcloud.com/pianio/sydney
Hi, Eleven77! First of all you have to know that:
- I’m using google translate and
- I am far from being an expert in the musical style of your track.
So, I can only speak from the sensations that your track produces.
The first thing I feel is that the general sound of the track is very nice, soft and warm. Very suitable for this style!
In particular, I find it hard to find the melody of the track. I understand that this style does not use a mix where the melody is something very prominent, but the feeling when listening to your track is to be listening to a long musical introduction (mainly during the first minute of music) and have the need for the track advance, develop and that does not happen.
I think it can be a matter of mix and choice of instruments to highlight a little the melodic line of the track.
I repeat, I am not an expert in this musical style so my opinion may be very wrong …
I hope my words will help you.
It was really helpful.
Thank you very much for your comment.