Kill the bird and try again.
Good luck!
Thanks, i will try
I wouldn’t like to offer my criticism until I understood myself what gets in or not. Maybe try some reverse cymbals every 30 seconds for no reason other than a minor change in instrumentation. Failing that, ukulele, whistle or delay guitar harmonics.
Joking of course. I liked your track, Peter McKinnon-y - though if it were to be true Epidemic… I mean Epic, I’d want to see a massive transition from intro to full-on chorus, and earlier on.
Don’t take any of my comments seriously, I know nothing.
Best of luck 
Reason to reject this - People who sale music on AJ have the right to decline your track = more money for them.
The track is super fine!
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