Help me with these Soft Rejected comments pretty please :*

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Hey guys, little help in addressing these soft rejection comments please:

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The typographic scale needs balancing - http://spencermortensen.com/articles/typographic-scale/ — (Can we mention we use VC & UA and they only use px? Or how do you guys tackle this comment?)

Make it more prominent: http://envato.d.pr/sLnh/rl1SoOen — (What they meant here?)

Font readability is bit low: http://envato.d.pr/12hc5/ZkbMzCpg , http://envato.d.pr/13JQO/1cK2biqU , http://envato.d.pr/15HgS/5mzNSrB9 — We have addressed these by changing fonts etc. Are they fine now guys?

Thanks in advance! :slight_smile:

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There’s still a few bits which are hard to read:

  • The button text lettering is very close with more space than needed either side of the word and it looks like more padding under the text than above?

  • In 'Our packages, personally I owuld align the sub title “there are many…” with the second box below it and try using lower case and different weights which may make that clearer

You actually space right on the packages page with “our stories”!

  • "Preview package is like the button text very cramped

  • “Jon Cena” vary name and testimonial (maybe make testimonial a little longer to make it stand out)

  • Compare titles like “GENUINE QUALITY, MATERIALS” (it’s nice) and how much clearer it is to read than “GENUINITY, LUXURY, STYLE” which again has that cramped and excessive line height styling.

  • make the contact info box wider and space everything more esp. London Bridge…

  • Portfolio hover text is much better now

  • Blog “Read Story” and “Latest posts” same issue with that font styling and too much space either side in the button

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Thank you so much @charlie4282 :slight_smile: Any ideas for the remaining issues:

– The typographic scale needs balancing - http://spencermortensen.com/articles/typographic-scale/3 — (Can we mention we use VC & UA and they only use px? Or how do you guys tackle this comment?)

– Make it more prominent: http://envato.d.pr/sLnh/rl1SoOen — (What they meant here?)

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First one - I’ve never seen that issues before here so not too sure but the readability should help.

The second link is passworded

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It wasn’t password protected; but now it is. Strange. But thanks Charlie for being so kind.

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@charlie4282 - Here’s the password protected link - http://envato.d.pr/sLnh/rl1SoOen . Any idea what to do there?

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By “prominent” they mean stand out more but I think the title looks nice.

  • The read more button has the same font issues raised earlier and still too much padding left/right of the text.

  • That font you use for the title I REALLY like but I think it is causing some of your issues as the narrow lines are a bit tricky to read/don’t especially stand out. You could try a different font or increase the size or weight of this one.

Your home page titles like “Genuine materials” and “Our Vision” etc. that use the same font all work slightly better as they are either larger or heavier

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Thanks good sir! You’re a lifesaver. Have a great day.

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Pleasure - it’s a nice design and I personally like the font choice but I do see what the reviewer means in places. Good luck

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