indeed u have a good start , but need a bit more work too. The thing that Manu said about the concept is legitimate but however this maybe in keeping with someone needs, so this is not a big deal for me … then , u need to change the name as mentioned by @ManuDesign.Next, u need to make an extra effort when it comes to typos and typo combination , at this time all is too plain and here u are expected to focus much on these elements … as for presentation, once again @ManuDesign was true once again this is essential, both for reviewers and buyers to “buy it”. At this stage this is not good enough as far as this is concerned … but good start , good base to work with 