Help Me See the Error of My Ways

This song was rejected for quality purposes. Interested in any feedback.

Please and thank you.

Normally when people post on here with these it can be hard to tell why exactly they were rejected, but this is rather obvious. This is really messy in the low end with the drums and bass. The sounds aren’t great and the chord progression and melody could be better. Look up some chord progressions, use the best quality sounds you can and add expression and detail. I hope this helps.

I think it lacks some harmony. the instruments are somewhat disparate and therefore the melody…