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Hello!
My new work was rejected. But I want to finish it and I want it to be “good” for VH.

Please give me some advice. Is the problem with the design or with the structure or with the both? Should I add something or change? (maybe all title should be with the same background?)

Sorry for my English =)

Here is a project:

Thanks!