Hello. Who knows, why reject? I need advice …
Hi @KakaduCreation! First thing that comes to mind is that it’s to quantized. Especially the piano-part. Sounds very robotic! Try loosen that Q up a bit. The mix/master also sounds a little weak and dull in the highs.
Generally speaken it’s better to have less movement in the accompanying instruments on these kind of tracks. The piano- and guitar-part now has a very arpeggiated style of playing and that can complicate things in the overall feeling.
Simpler is better!
Thanks for the answer) It is important for me)
I think you are right)