The guitar is a loop repeating itself identical (too mechanical, quantized, loud and dry)? Here is the first possible problem to me. Your bright synth could be less static in volume maybe (more wavy just a bit and with high shelf automation following the subtle volume change). I like the track. Nice composition, vibe, mix, contrast but the guitar really don’t fit as it is.
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Try to use some guitar instruments and play that instead of a loop. Try to make some simple melody from it by changing some notes every 4 bars so that it does not sounds so looped.
Overall, good composition.
I already removed the guitar, again rejected