Hello, Please indicate my mistakes?

“”""“This item does not meet the general commercial quality standard required to be accepted on AudioJungle, unfortunately.”"""""

Hello, Please indicate my mistakes? I want to develop and write music. Kahon wrote in a hand on the microphone.
Instruments in the track: Hang, Cajon, Musique Box, Sleigh Bells

How to get a commercial sound?

Hello,

I think the hang is too loud and there is lack of low end in the whole track. Also, the track is too long, the arrangement and development is a bit too monotonic.

Good luck

Thank you so much

1 Like