Hello! I'm beginner. Please give me feedback.


#1

Hello to all AudiJungle authors) I’m new author and beginner. Can you give me feedback of my track, please?
Thank you. Have a nice day.

Track


#2

Hello, the the kick is way too loud and strong.


#3

I think that there is not enough brightness and presence of the mix, as if the hi-cut filter was used. In general, the arrangement is not so bad, everything is within the framework of market standards, but over mixing it would be better to work.


#4

I agree with the guys) Wanna add that the build up is a bit too long. You can make the track shorter but more dynamic :+1:t2:


#5

Thank you guys!