Hello,i need feedback before upload...thanks

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#1

Hello everyone,i’m Pascal from France…my first three items were rejected…i ask feedbacks before uploading…

https://soundcloud.com/user-167652599/inspiring-motivational-vibes-preview

thank you in advance…


#2

Shakers Intrusive. guitars need to be balanced for volume and panorama. They should not sound like a main at one time.


#3

Thank you for your feedback…


#4

Interesting and motivating track! I like it! =)

But…

I don’t like sound of snare (claps?) try to replace this sample on other. Shakers (hi-hats?) sounds too intrusively and loud (agry with @EvgenM) . Also pay attention on balance of volume between instruments and frequency conflicts.


#5

Hello, Thank you for taking the time to listen and your feedback…
I will do this…

thanks again…