Hello again community AJ authors.And again i need your help!

Envato Authors AudioJungle
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And again i got a hard reject :slight_smile: :slight_smile: :slight_smile:
I will listen all critics.Of course if you have a time

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Hello, I am a newbe here, but heres my 2 cents:

I really like your playing but somewhere after 0:30 song is becoming inconsistent. My opinion is that you dont need that part, and that you should continue melody with some major chords like in the first part.

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Maybe rhythm is a bit too loose. Also, having a single instrument is sometimes a motive for rejection.

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Ok I`m try to fix this changes

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I like this composition !!! Really cool !!!:smiley:

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Thanks for all your comments man :)))

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Hey, Only one reason - troubles with rhythm, and that’s all. You must to do some quantize for example in Flex(in logic pro x), and I think - a little bit of compression will make sounding better, some -opto compression like CLA-2A or other.

Regards, D-MUSIC Studio!

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Thanks a lot for advice. I`ll try to do those changes when i drive to my workstation again.