Has anyone got any thoughts on this track

another hard rejection :frowning: has anyone got any thoughts on this track anything that stands out


This tracks needs (in my humble opinion):
Brighter mix
Higher quality of sounds
An interesting / better arrangement
Proper mastering to fix the compression of certain instruments

Just a thought, maybe the track that you uploaded for preview didn’t have the watermark (Audiojungle) like the one you’ve shared through soundcloud.

hi guys thankyou so much for listening i appreciate it, i will work on brightness and compression. i think at this point after a million rejections im going to have to find a balance between losing hope and wasting my time, i’ll get there. i definately included the watermark so no luck there haha.