Hard rejections, need your opinion

Interested in your opinion than a bad track, what’s wrong? I waited for 10 days, after a soft rejections and 2 Held on this track https://soundcloud.com/mikhailgrayd/happy-children

No bad track :wink: The mixing/mastering is not that good… The bass for example could sound tighter, not so wide. And the guitar starting at 0:25 sounds not very nice. What were the soft rejection issues? So you got 2 soft rejections and after that a hard rejection?

@FOXYAudio Thank you for your analysis! No, soft rejection was 1 and 2 Held. In general, the soft rejection was written to correct the whistle (he had been there), I fixed it on the bells.