Hard rejection - Would love some feedback !

Hi guys,

So I’m more of a rock’n’roll kind of guy, and I never get rejected in this style. However I recently had a melody in mind that wouldn’t fit on any type of rock so I decided to make an electronic track out of It.

To be honnest, I don’t even listen to this kind of music so I’m not even surprised that this track was rejected - I don’t really know the rules of it. However, I’d be happy to learn and have a couple of suggestions from you guys in order to improve this track and get it validated !

Thanks in advance,