Hello friend! Listening to your track I would have to say that the only issues to me sounds like are in the MIX. I think the drums are too sharp and the guitar and the part after 0:34 where the guitar plays the kind of arpeggios sounds very messy. But I do love the idea of the song and I really think you don’t need to do that much to make it ready for AJ. Just give your mixing another shot. Do proper gain staging from scratch. Dont be afraid to simplify your song, its sometimes for the best. Best advice I can give is to do AB all the time, especially when you mixing your track. Compare your track to other COMMERCIAL tracks that you like. That will make a huge difference. Best of luck!
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