Hard Rejection on AE Motion Graphic Template.

I’m looking for HARD critique and constructive criticism of my newest simple minimalist intro pack. It got rejected (as like the past 4 different templates I’ve submitted) and I’m very frustrated for the fact that I can’t get anything on the market anymore. The pack is meant to be very simple and clean, as per the current design trend strategies companies wish to brand themselves with, but was still hard rejected. The pack is a sequel to my first simple minimalistic pack which was very commercially successful.

Here is the preview video:

The package includes a full tutorial with voiceover for modifying the template.

bumping this thread because i still want feedback

looking for feedback still…