Hard rejection need some feedback please


#1

Hello Envato, Had a look at my theme and can see myself this ain’t up to standard of some inspiration I have been looking at, Could you please name me some good areas and some poor areas to improve would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.


#2

Better typography, need spacing (looks cluttered) . just my 2 cents


#3

Thanks man, Will crack on with it


#4

really hard to breathe, especially in second section. And maybe you need to add one more section with some addition content.


#5

Increase padding, need more sections