Hard rejection need some feedback please

Hello Envato, Had a look at my theme and can see myself this ain’t up to standard of some inspiration I have been looking at, Could you please name me some good areas and some poor areas to improve would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.

Better typography, need spacing (looks cluttered) . just my 2 cents

Thanks man, Will crack on with it

really hard to breathe, especially in second section. And maybe you need to add one more section with some addition content.

Increase padding, need more sections