Hard rejection feedback please?

Hi, this is my first hard rejection from audiojungle, and I thought it was a better track than my previous ones.

Any ideas please?

Steampunk city - YouTubehttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mze_2d_Xagc

IMHO - Not commercially viable

Strings have too long attack so the melody is not punchy and seems too delayed. Try stemming out the strings and adjust the track delay so it is unified with the arrangement. It is a common problem with string libraries, the attack is too slow for these kind of passages.


Thanks, the strings suggestion is useful.
In terms of commercial viability - do you mean the style is too unusual? They accepted my “dark fairytale” track and it’s gotten sales so I thought fantasy is a valid commercial option for tracks.