What happens? it is impossible… How do I have to create track if I am not understanding what envato needs.
I’ve read documentation, tried to make all what Community is recommending, but… The worse track was placed successful (I didn’t guess that this track will be placed, it was just attempt to become an author).
After that I analyzed some tracks and tried to create something like other successfully music works (I mean compered the quality, volume, instruments, structure etc.)
I suppose: whistle was recording on bad mic and voices are from standard library of Logic X Pro (sample rate is correct like in the first submitted track)
here is: maybe structure… I don’t know. What do you think? Maybe is there problem in my description of profile? Is music very bad and terrible? Help please.
I understand that I am a competitor for you and there is nothing why you have to help me, but if you want to help just write please. Very important for me because to many hours I am trying to create new peace, you know and Would like to improve myself here on Envato.
sorry I’ll give my honest feedback, don’t take it personnally
the first corporate track… well… the guitar seems to resonate too much from one chord to the other, the bass is a bit… well… special…
Second track, this fast arpeggio piano has a strange sound, too mechanical and robotic, and the drums sounds are more “metal” than “romantic” to my ears. Also the strings after 2:00 sound like a mellotron.
Now for the track that has been accepted… I am surprised as well… around 2:15 there are big timing issues… I remember having been rejected because I had a slight slight timing issue with some hats that were loose to keep the groove
Well I hope this will help you a bit…
Good luck for your next submissions. I know how it feels to get a rejection…
The guitar strummer from kontakt is too evident in the first track (i’ve used it and I always try to hide it). The vocals sound too gospel, they don’t fit the mood. In the second track the mellotron strings don’t fit the genre. In this context you need to sound real. I love how mellotron stuff sounds but it can be distracting if used in a track like that. Also drums sound distracting. None of the tracks sound engaging or emotional to me. Try to focus more on emotions. Add more organic elements to your music. Try to make it sound more real: use better sounds, play with the midi timing and velocity and try to improve your mixing skills. I think that the composition (chords, melodies and arrangement) is good but you need to step up the production.
need to learn and hear more.
