Hard-Rejected Tracks, Could I Get Feedback Please?

Hello!

As title says, I had hard-rejected tracks. If someone could please give me some feedback so that I could work on improving.

Happy Trap: https://soundcloud.com/user-678308070/happy-trap-full/s-08Mew

Modern Technology: https://soundcloud.com/user-678308070/relaxing-modern-technology/s-imjRH

First one feels like lacking energy you could try using a more distorted synth bass,
Second one sounds a little muddy and melody is a little boring needs more movement

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Hey man, thanks so much! I really appreciate the feedback. I’ll look into fixing those issues. :+1: