Hard Rejected Track, would love to hear some feedback for me to improve

I am new to making game music, especially loopable ones. This is a loopable game music track for background that i made which has got rejected. Would love to hear some feedback for me to improve.
Here is the track. Thank you for helping me.
https://soundcloud.com/ozan-demirel-417880832/background-game-music-loop

Audio Jungle is not quite the place to sell abstract adiatonic electronic music.The policy is clear against disonnant music tracks. For AJ market,your track
has not commercial value. Cheers.

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Hi,
I like the track, it’s got an element of “Bladerunner” to it. Unfortunately, I agree with the other comment. Although it’s not strictly “dissonant” the choice of synth gives it that kind of sound. It’s also lacking in structure and the melody meanders a little. I really like it though. Add some structure to it and try again. Also, It ends very abruptly on soundcloud, even if it is a loop, make sure it has a clear beginning, middle and end.
You’ve chosen to compose something that is quite niche though and unfortunately, for Audiojungle, has no commercial appeal.
Good luck with it.

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Thank you, i will try to change the things you have said. Thank you for helping.