Hello everybody. Would you please share your thoughts about this little piece of music? It’s been hard rejected and I really can’t see why. I was sure that it was good-sounding and well-composed. Thank you in advance.
Please only serious suggestions - critiques! Thanks
Here is the track:
Mmmm, I’m afraid it has no commercial value… you need to work on your composing and mixing skills, Hans!!! Hahahah! I recommend you check other approved items in AJ like “Epic Epicness is Epic Epicness for Epic Epicness” or “Motivate the motivational motivation” 
Hahahah!
Hi Hans. Violons sound fake. You have to change your vst. Lack of low end. Where is the kick ? What about ukulele and Snap ? … No commercial value.
Sign : A Grumpy and tactless guy
(Please tell me that I’m do it well aha 
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The composition is nice, the movie is also nice 
but you should work harder Hans!! 
Thanks guys!!! I will work on your suggestions ! <3
Good luck with your future sale Hans !