Hard Rejected Lower Third

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1

Hi Guys,

This is my first attempt at this. It got rejected. Can anyone shed some light on what I might be doing wrong and what it takes to resolve the issue.

Demo link:

Thanks in advance.

2

I don’t like the moves, looks linear. You should use easy in and easy out and play with the graph editor.

3

Did you submit just one single lower third? I’ve never seen a template of one single lower third, so I think it’s obligatory to add more varieties.

I think the current design needs significant improvements to be made, if it were up to me, I would change the current design completely, and there would still be a tiny little chance of getting it approved as the marketplace is floating with this kind of templates.

The whole animation takes less than 2 seconds, which is too fast I think. Try making it +5 seconds, and easing the animation in and out.

Good luck!