Hey H8!
I’m not at all well-versed in the ambient side of AudioJungle, but I figured sharing some thoughts on it couldn’t hurt.
Listening to your most recent track, ‘Thoughts’, and then comparing it to this one, there is definitely a difference in feel. ‘Thoughts’ certainly has a more ambient feel to it, at least to my ears.
I think the problem with this track that detracts from the ambience is the upfront, block electric piano chords. It’s a rather distinct sound, which makes the listener focus on it, which I believe is the opposite effect you want for ambient music.
Other than that I don’t really see any problems. As I said I have never listened to or produced ambient music so my ideas may not be totally applicable, but hopefully they help a little bit.
Good luck on future uploads!