My template got hard rejected.
What would be the most important things to change and what doesn’t look good?
Is there any chance I can get this accepted with some major changes?
I really need some feedback. It’s my first template, please help. 
Your help will be greatly appreciated. 
Here is the link:
Line - Coming Soon Template
Typography needs a fair amout of work throughout
The design is not very revolutionary or stand out
spacing is inconsistent in places
nav scroll is quite bumpy
generally the colours make it look a little unappealing and outdated; while there is little visual hierarchy.
Thank’s for the reply, I appreciate it. This will be helpful