Hard rejected HTML Coming Soon Template - any suggestions?


#1

My template got hard rejected.
What would be the most important things to change and what doesn’t look good?
Is there any chance I can get this accepted with some major changes?
I really need some feedback. It’s my first template, please help. :pensive:
Your help will be greatly appreciated. :smiley:
Here is the link:
Line - Coming Soon Template


#2

Typography needs a fair amout of work throughout

The design is not very revolutionary or stand out

spacing is inconsistent in places

nav scroll is quite bumpy

generally the colours make it look a little unappealing and outdated; while there is little visual hierarchy.


#3

Thank’s for the reply, I appreciate it. This will be helpful :smiley: