Hard rejected Doctor E-Newsletter


#1

Doctor E-Newsletter (width 900px)
Demo - http://s28.postimg.org/oeqh6aat9/Doctor_E_Newsletter.jpg
Plz advice me
Thanks…


#2

@arnabkumar

Yes, main graphic is blurry, as well as a smaller part of the main doctor image.

Looks like you enlarged a file image, (never enlarge, unless it is supposed to be blurry, then it is probably ok)?

Apart from that overall design is a bit basic, and design defiantly has a 1955 type feel. Not sure if that works with cutting edge medical treatments?

But, yeah, Never Enlarge; that is a sure ticket to it ending up in the bin.

Good luck. :sunglasses:


#3

I think you have potential but you must use guides and pay attention to padding and margins. right now, looks like it only took you a few minutes to elaborate this design. think about it, would you pay for something that looks like it was done with not enough attention to details?


#4

Thanks ,
I will fix my error as your advice and remember this.
Is ther any typography problem ? If you want I can upload it to redpen for better view.


#5

No, text seems ok, but don’t put italic and straight together, risky!

And get rid of the social media icons, not allowed in flyers, so most likely not allowed elsewhere!

:sunglasses:


#6

No, social icon allowed in web e - newsleter see here http://graphicriver.net/item/corporate-newsletter/12501463
I have used http://fontawesome.io/cheatsheet/ .


#7

@arnabkumar

Ok, l was surprised that they allow them in newletters, since they definitely don’t allow them in flyers!

I guess it is ok then? :sunglasses:


#8

Yes they don’t allow in flyer that is absolutely right.