Мой трэк отклонили (Hard Reject)

music
tips-and-tricks
#1

Why did not they take my music? (Folk, Acoustic)
https://soundcloud.com/user-842935630/light-evening-preview

#2

Production, composition as well as playing are really amateurish. That arpeggio over Bb sounds wrong. The instruments are not well arranged, in fact the longer the track goes the more it falls apart.