Hard reject:(

Hello everybody. I wrote children track and got another reject,what do you think about reason?

Arrangement and composition is very good for me.

Hmmm something with mix, to much high band, too much compression? Some level correction? And strings could be better. There is a lot of that quality music in AJ, but it looks like now it’s hard to pass reviews.

He’s repeating the melody. Could it be the reason

+1 to the repetitiveness of the rhythm guitar , which will eat out your brain till the end of track.

I think it would be a much better idea to have a B part instead of an A part that goes growing and growing. And also there is that piano melody after one minute sounding too quite. Then this track i think is for successful review