Hello everybody. I wrote children track and got another reject,what do you think about reason?
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8Rlx5hZepVLUnZ1eXk2bHFoZGM/view
Arrangement and composition is very good for me.
Hmmm something with mix, to much high band, too much compression? Some level correction? And strings could be better. There is a lot of that quality music in AJ, but it looks like now it’s hard to pass reviews.
He’s repeating the melody. Could it be the reason
+1 to the repetitiveness of the rhythm guitar , which will eat out your brain till the end of track.
I think it would be a much better idea to have a B part instead of an A part that goes growing and growing. And also there is that piano melody after one minute sounding too quite. Then this track i think is for successful review