Hard reject this track. Someone could give me some advice?

This is the link: https://soundcloud.com/betomataloni/naughty-kids

much appreciate your opinions.
(Excuse my English, I’m using google translate).
Thank you very much.

I think that the composition is good, I would change the instruments, maybe add a bit of color

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Thank you!

I think its a nice track, but maybe you have put too many ideas into this song? Maybe the form could be simpler? And the handclaps doesnt sound good and a bit out of time. And I also think the drums gets too busy at times.
At the same time I think childrens music should be unpredictable and full of surprices and funny sounds.
Good luck!

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than you very much!

nice track!)

Than you very much! I appreciate your words!