Hard Reject? Really Need Help!

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#1

Could you please help me with this. Reject reason " commercial composition/arrangement standard what’s wrong with commercial composition / arangement standart in this song. I will be thankfull for any comments. https://soundcloud.com/cagdasturgut/wild-and-loud-prewiev


#2

Poor spatial processing try to do more and to place instruments more for the panorama, try KVR: Brainworx bxstereomaker. good luck.