hard reject please help


#1

https://soundcloud.com/user-382785002/upbeat-energetic-indie-rock what wrong? Please help!!!

And second track https://soundcloud.com/user-382785002/acoustic-guitar-indie also I can`t understand what wrong because similar track was approach https://audiojungle.net/item/upbeat-acoustic-guitar/19295796


#2

Hi @CeciliaRec, nice tracks. For me the kick drum in the first track doesn’t realy fit. Sounds kinda blurred. Otherwise I see no other issues there, the track sounds cool! The second track could maybe take a little bit less deep frequences. Also I see no more issues here…


#3

Thanks a lot!


#4

Sounds interesting!)
But strange pads after 0,37!
I can’t hear some instruments, because this pad is too loud!!!
And mixing is not perfect!
Try to change it in your, track! :slight_smile:


#5

Thanks a lot! I will try to do better and will write for You if track will approve


#6

I did new Mix, Mastering and changed all that You suggest. It is the result https://soundcloud.com/user-382785002/upbeat-energetic-indie-rock4/s-Im37l Is it ready for jungle standarts?


#7

HI mate,
I love your idea.
In my view, the first track have points here :

  1. The kick didn’t sound “click” and punchy as it should be.
  2. The whole drum kit need more powerful, louder… ( you can do track compress, parallel compress, EQ, reverb…)
  3. The track lack the contrast between verse and chorus (too much motif repeat maybe)
    4, Your mixing and mastering too.
    Hope you get better luck.
    Please listen to this track. Very energetic and powerful.
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rtVU–O29oY

#8

I did new Mix, Mastering and changed all that You suggest. It is the result https://soundcloud.com/user-382785002/upbeat-energetic-indie-rock4/s-Im37l Is it ready for jungle standarts?


#9

Hi @CeciliaRec ,
I think you have too much motif repeat here. It make your track monotone .
What drum sample you used for this track ? your drum is a problem here. The tom tom is too quite.


#10

Hi, thanks. I used indie loop library. I agree with You I will develop melodic line and change Drums


#11

Sounds better :slight_smile:


#12

Thanks ! yes, I did. I understood the problem was in mastering this also I want to develop arrange. LongXmusic I think write
Thanks a lot!


#13

Hi Infraction I want to thank You for helping me I did all that You propose and a track was approach !!))) Thanks a lot! https://audiojungle.net/item/upbeat-energetic-indie-rock/19445978


#14

Hi LongXmusic I want to thank You for helping me I did all that You propose and a track was approach !!))) Thanks a lot! https://audiojungle.net/item/upbeat-energetic-indie-rock/19445978