Hi GreenFalcon. I think you need to work on putting more variety into the harmonic structure of the track. At the moment there are basically only two chords throughout and it gets very monotonous. On the same lines, a two-note bassline throughout isn’t doing anything for the track either.
Also, something that I think really sticks out is the male voice ‘hey’ sample in the 2nd and last versions. I get what you were going for, but the repeat of the same sample over and over has a fatiguing effect on the ear.
Too many repetitions (in my opinion) chto is not good. Need to add development. You also need to (Mastering) it better to make it brighter (equalization is needed). And also at 0:39 second porridge begins with.
This is my personal opinion. I do not want to offend you and I want to help you.